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Finally this is done!  Wow, I had so much fun on this.  Please tell me if it doesn't make sense to you or if it looks wonky.  I'm trying to make my work as excellent as possible so I can get a job as an animator and I would REALLY appreciate critiques :) Thanks!
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:iconjustinmanas:
justinmanas Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
This looks great! Have you ever thought of calling up super book?
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Ditchmaster Featured By Owner May 31, 2014   Filmographer
No I haven't, which company are you referring to?
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Charizardtamer12 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Love the detail on the character and the colors. My only suggestion would be to have a more contrasting background because in the first second of the animation it's difficult to see his hair against the sky. I might also make the ocean darker to give more of a depth to the scene.
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Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014   Filmographer
Thanks for the feedback!  I'll definitely find a way to make him stand out more in the future.
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NeonCrescent Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student General Artist
That was a very magical 3 seconds~
hands down flawless~
Chinatsu Yoshikawa (Really Yay) [V2] 
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Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014   Filmographer
Thank you!! :D
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S-Matthews Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very very nice 
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:iconditchmaster:
Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014   Filmographer
Thanks! :D  Glad you liked it!
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AndriyB Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
awesome!!!
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:iconditchmaster:
Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014   Filmographer
Thanks! :D
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mossyhairundys Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
I think it looks alright.
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:iconditchmaster:
Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Filmographer
Thank you! :)
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:icontsuchihiko:
TsuChihiko Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
That's it??
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Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Filmographer
Yeah..  I didn't have time to do more :/  But I will make a longer version once I figure out what I'm doing!  I need to go back and study basics again first.
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TsuChihiko Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah....Bunny Emoji-42 (Awww) [V2] 
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divoha4-1 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student General Artist
AWESOME I GLOMPS U!!! i wish i could animate my pyro character like dis 
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:iconditchmaster:
Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Filmographer
You can do it, it just takes practice and patience!
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:icondivoha4-1:
divoha4-1 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Danke ^.^
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:iconrainvine:
rainvine Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014   Filmographer
Im going to show my professor to give you good feedback!
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:iconditchmaster:
Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014   Filmographer
YAYY  thank you so much!! :D
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EvlonArts Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
This is really neat to get to see come to life, and very much you!  

For Crit, I have to agree the chest glow is a bit distracting from the animals from one hand to the other.
Also I feel like this could use a few extra seconds at the end, as this cuts off very suddenly D:

Also I feel like the fish coming out are very blandish compared to the rest of the image.  Perhaps some simple patterning in darker/lighter colour would help that (like the devil ray for example, some slightly darker green spotting or something)  It can't be too much, or it'd be too decorative/distracting.  Just a little, like the kid has would help tie them back into the piece.  The purple fish already have some, and they look better for it :)
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Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014   Filmographer
Mmm.  I see what you mean.  Ok, thanks!  I'll be sure to address that when I work on it!
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EvlonArts Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I know you'll keep working on it until it's amazing :>
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Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014   Filmographer
Yeah, once I figure out what I'm doing I'll probably re-do the whole thing.  It's not what I had in mind when I set out to animate it, so that tells me I have a lot to learn.  But!  New project first!  I'm very excited about what I'm doing next!
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EvlonArts Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Cna't wait to see what is next :)
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Legends2D Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome sauce!!!!
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Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014   Filmographer
Hey thanks!
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Legends2D Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:P
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Orion159 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
First of all, great job! Especially in maintaining his form in the rotation.

Secondly, this solution may seem a bit simplistic, but if you add a second or three of blanks onto the animation, the webplayers will cut that off, leaving the good part alone.

A bit shoddy and unprofessional I know, but hey, whatever gets the toast brown.
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Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014   Filmographer
Oh ho!! Thank you kind person, I will be using this trick in the future!
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Orion159 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:TipOfTheHat: 
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:iconrainvine:
rainvine Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014   Filmographer
WOAH That was beautiful!!!!!!!
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:iconditchmaster:
Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014   Filmographer
Thanks :D
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Emberling Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
So pretty I am a dummy! 
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:iconditchmaster:
Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014   Filmographer
Thank you!
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dawnwally Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
It ends so suddenly :(
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:iconditchmaster:
Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014   Filmographer
Yeah, DA actually cut off the last part, which makes me angry.  Sorry!
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:icondawnwally:
dawnwally Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
well it is only 3 seconds also.
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Ditchmaster Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014   Filmographer
Haha yep. Needs to be longer!
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